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Survivor Shy - 'Help!' by Mattatatta Survivor Shy - 'Help!' by Mattatatta
"'What happened?'

"I dizzily came to in the tipped-over carriage. My eyes slid into focus and revealed a mess of shattered glass and scattered luggage. My head hurt, several places of my body stung from cuts, and I could feel bruises all over myself from where I had hit something while being bounced around like a rubber ball.

"I had been knocked unconscious in the crash, and I was still dazed. I spent a moment verbally trying to pace my way through my foggy memories up until now. 'I was sat down, I... I received a letter from Twilight through Spike, and then there... there was a bright light and a shockwave. Everypony fell silent, or I was deafened, or...'

"My eyes widened and I scrambled onto my hooves in alarm. 'The other passengers!'

"I limped my way all over the carriage, searching for other ponies who may have been hurt. I moved luggage away in case there was anypony trapped underneath, and looked high and low. But there was nopony else in this carriage. Quickly, I negotiated with the lopsided train and searched all of the cars. the locomotive, and the caboose. Each one turned up empty, save for various belongings laying around.

"I began to panic; what if I had been unconscious for so long, that nopony saw me, and they all left together to get help? I clambered outside into the desert Sun, and broke out into an awkward, pained run. I ran up to the top of the nearest dune and looked over the other side. There was no sign of anypony. I looked around, hoping to catch a silhouette in the horizon, but only sand and sky were all I could see. Desperately, I called for help, but no response came.

"Tears formed in my eyes, I called for help, again and again, until my throat was sore and I was coughing on sand.

"Everypony was gone, and I had been left alone."



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Started this yesterday, finished it this evening. I'm glad I managed to get it done that fast, though I lost a lot of time on sketches I didn't like, and beating Skyrim's main quest when I became too stressed to draw.

I know I'm setting up a lot of cliffhangers, and am not addressing any of them. I wanted to follow up the last scene I submitted with the scene directly after, but after scrapping several sketches, I decided to leave and go back to it later.

So I opened up my in-progress, condensed version of the entire story and the scenes I have planned, and picked out a scene I had already noted down ideas for, and rolled with that.

I'm hoping to pick up the pace and start getting these scenes drawn, written, and uploaded on a far more regular basis. Tomorrow I hope to start a new scene, and have it finished the day after. I've even set myself a challenge to try and FINISH Survivor Shy before the end of August.

Anyway, leave your comments, suggestions, Wild Mass Guessing, etc in the comments section below! I always enjoy reading what people have to say. And if you follow my Tumblr, I greatly appreciate all the likes, reblogs, and critiques I receive. I'm always trying new things with my artwork, and I often try new things upon suggestion.
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CyberfoxVII Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
Hm... from an explosion that big, I would think the entire train would have gotten derailed. Yet somehow the caboose remains perfectly in place, while the others are flung away...

...Sorry. Nitpicking. Read the prologue on FimFiction. Looks interesting. Will probably be reading more.
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Mattatatta Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The more I think about it, the less sense it makes to me too. I'm not a clever pony. I just pictured in my mind the train being jolted harshly, but the locomotive being the one that fell off the tracks - taking most of the train with it.

I hope you read more of the story on FimFiction, if you do, don't be afraid to leave a comment!
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CyberfoxVII Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Well, I don't have an account on FimFiction, since I generally prefer to minimize the number of accounts I have across everything on the internet (too lazy to deal with password assignment and whatnot). For that reason, if I were to make a comment anywhere, it would probably be under the relevant image here on DA.

...which is pretty much what I did just now, I guess.
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Mattatatta Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah okay
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Kimberly-AJ-04-02 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Poor old filly. She has been smothered with cuts and bruises. She needs to be mended for my hopes.
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SuperStar-Hero Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Is this Fluttershy?:?
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Mattatatta Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes.
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SuperStar-Hero Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Okay!
that actualy explains it.^^;

'Cause when I saw one of the other Survivor shy art, i thought,"That pony looks like Fluttershy, is it really her?:?"
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Mattatatta Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah yeah, Survivor Shy is really the name of the story and series of illustrations. It's about as uncreative as fanfic names go, but to change it now would be too bothersome for my followers and readers :P
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SuperStar-Hero Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Okay^^;
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